Social Media

Final Assignment

James H. Williams Jr.

COM/170

January 25, 2011

Latasha Bennett

Part I

Final Assignment

Out of the two paragraphs I chose paragraphs 1 and 3. The one that stood out to me the most was paragraph 3 it was more detailed and it had full sentences. Paragraph 1 was just a lot of statements and the sentence structure was poor, it was more of a conversation than letting us know about wills and what the purpose is to make sure that you have a will in place so some of these things that this person was talking about would not happen to you. I think in paragraph 3 they used great word choice and the rhythm was on target and it lets you know why a lot of people are denied credit. The rhythm of paragraph 1 was based on what he went through than what a will really is.

Part II

Out of the two paragraphs I chose one and three. The one that stood out to me the most was paragraph three it was more detailed, and it had full sentences. Paragraph one had many statements, and the sentence structure was poor, it was more of a conversation than letting us know about wills, and what the purpose is to make sure that they have a will in place, so some of these statements that this person was stating would not happen to you. I think in paragraph three they used superior word choice, and the rhythm was on target, and it lets us know why people are denied credit. The rhythm of paragraph one was based on what he went through then what a will actually is.

Part III

In receiving the information from write point I received some helpful information. The info that I got out of it was that instead of, putting actual numbers under ten you should write them out. Write point also taught me to use an active voice instead of a passive voice when writing because it can make your paragraph officious and tedious to read. For example a passive voice= the paper was completed on time. Active voice=...