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Introduction [Avoid using "intro" or "introduction" if this is a subtitle. At the beginning of the essay, the following could be nothing else]

The show I have [Avoid use of the first person (I, me, my) in academic writing unless writing about a personal experience. Check first person use with your instructor. ] selected for this content analysis is “How I Met Your Mother” .The theme of the show is Ted Mosby (Bob Saget) the main character is telling his daughter and son the story how he met his wife. The stories time frame is set in 2030; however, happening in the year 2005 [Writing suggestion--2005 could not be anything but a year, so "the year" or "the year of" is superfluous] . The story is regarding the time Ted was single living with his roommates; Marshal Eriksen (Jason Segel), a law student and Lily Aldrin (Alyson Hannigan), a kindergarten teacher. The show also involves his best friend Barney (Neil Patrick Harris), a womanizer with...