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Being away from my best friends is a really tough thing. I really can’t believe that I could do

and actually enter a university without them. I was wondering lonely at my break thinking about

them and about things we would be doing if they were with me now, do I decided to call and

check up on them. My friend said “hey” and I said “Sara I’m really feeling so lonely without you

guys!” I think that she felt that I was feeling really blue so she said “you’re not missing

anything here we just met by coincidence and for a few minutes because everyone has a class to

go to” ,I could hear their joyful laughs so there was no way that I would fall for that, I know she

was trying to make me feel better but it didn’t work. To come and think of it now, maybe this

experience will teach me to be much stronger, confident and patient. Being away from my best friends is a really tough thing. I really can’t believe that I could do

and actually enter a university without them. I was wondering lonely at my break thinking about

them and about things we would be doing if they were with me now, do I decided to call and

check up on them. My friend said “hey” and I said “Sara I’m really feeling so lonely without you

guys!” I think that she felt that I was feeling really blue so she said “you’re not missing

anything here we just met by coincidence and for a few minutes because everyone has a class to

go to” ,I could hear their joyful laughs so there was no way that I would fall for that, I know she

was trying to make me feel better but it didn’t work. To come and think of it now, maybe this

experience will teach me to be much stronger, confident and patient.

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