The Devil's Promise

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The Devil’s Promise

Jhomaine

I woke up in a strange place, am I dreaming? I hope I’m not! This is a perfect place!

Where am I? Suddenly a good looking guy appeared in front of me. His magnetic smile melted my doubt, it’s not a dream!

He said something that I don’t understand and he extend his hand for me as if he wants me to come with him. I looked at his hand and then to his face again, he smiled and mutters another word. I took his hand. We walked side by side. I was amazed! What a wonderful place I am in!

He told me that he owns this place and will give it to me if I ask him. I was puzzled.

Who are you?

I am the man of your dream. I can give you everything.

Am I dreaming?

No, you’re not. I am real.

He smiled at me. Do you want to live in this place?

Yes!

Then follow me. Do what I say, be kind to me.

That’s what he said then He vanished. I was puzzled but I felt great!

Every day of my life he was with me. He told me what to do and I do everything that pleases him. He gave me what I want.

I felt great and powerful over everything. It’s just me and him, no one can interfere.

And then one day he asked me to do something, without hesitation I started to do it but from somewhere a voice called out to stop me. I was stunned for a moment. Who could that be?

Don’t mind him! Just do it!

But the voice was closer enough to be ignored. I looked around, and then I saw a figure.

Who are you?

“Don’t mind Him! Do what I said! “My guy’s voice was angry.

I looked at him. I was terrified he’s not the same guy I met! His eyes are blazing with fire, he was totally mad!

I step away from him. I was frightened.

Then the figure touches my hand, s struggled free, I looked at the guy again. He is smiling at me. “Do it.” He said gently. “Remember the beautiful place where we met? It’s all yours! Just do it!”

The figure speaks softly but the guy interrupted him. “This is none of your business! Don’t interfere! She is mine! She chose me over you! You...