Fmla

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Introduction [Writing suggestion: Avoid using "intro" or "introduction" if this is a subtitle. At the beginning of the essay, the following could be nothing else]

What is FMLA (Family Medical Leave Act ) ? [Writing suggestion: Unless in a quote or a title, avoid rhetorical questions in academic writing. A good idea is to provide answers, not questions] How is it used [The passive voice is a form of "be" (is) and a participle (used). Over-use of the passive voice can make paragraphs officious and tedious to read. Prefer the active voice. For example, passive voice = The paper was completed on time. Active voice = the student completed the paper on time. See Center for Writing Excellence > Tutorials & Guides > Grammar & Writing Guides >...