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Axia College Material
Appendix G
Peer Review Checklist*
What is the main point of this essay? | The main point of this essay is serial murders. |
What is the greatest strength of this essay? | I think that the introduction is the strongest strength of this essay. |
Does the introduction grab your interest and make you want to read on? Explain your answer. | Yes, it made me read the whole essay instead of just breezing threw it. |
What material does not seem to fit the main point of the essay or does not seem to be appropriate for the audience? | I think starting at the 5th paragraph the material doesn’t seem to be fit for the audience |
Where should the author add more details or examples? Explain your answer. | I think the author should have talked more about female serial killer because, the author left me wanting to know more about them. |
Where is the writing unclear or vague? | I think the writing becomes unclear at the 5th paragraph. |
What is your favorite part of this piece of writing? | The introduction is great and it is the best part of the author writing. |
What other comments might you provide for the author? | I would tell the author to stick to the main idea but, other than that it’s a great paragraph. |
*Adapted from Reinking, J. A., Hart, A. W., & Von der Osten, R. (2001). Strategies for successful
writing: A rhetoric, research guide, reader, and handbook (6th ed.). Upper Saddle River, NJ: Prentice-Hall.