Industrialization

Cause: examples about industrialization’s advantages.

It appears to me that you're discussing the positive effects that industrialization brings. However, cope with it with caution as sometimes these positive effects are not related with 'environment'

Cause:

In the progress of the society, industrialization is indispensable. It is widely acknowledge that factories are build for product more convenient and quickly. Because of indispensable, an increasing number of different kinds of productions which involved in different areas are varying and improving frequently. A considerable number of factories are constructed; those factories may product for countries’ requirements. In those modern factories, pure water has played an important role in production. Water is used to hydroelectric, electricity are supply for machine. Although use pure water to dissolve chemical medicine may cause water pollution, it is indispensable in production. In production, factories may let some sulfur dioxide, nitrogen dioxide and other gas which can cause acid rain out.

Title: Explain some effects of one aspect of economic development on the environment.

My aspect is industrialization.

My structure is: 

Introduction

Cause

Transition 

Effect 1,2,3

Cause:

In the progress of the society, industrialization is indispensable. It is widely acknowledged that factories are built for product more convenient and quickly. Because of...