Dd101 Tma03

[Part 1] What do the tables show about housing in England?

This essay will describe the information from three tables on housing in England, focusing on quantitative data collected from the National Statistic publications ‘Social Trends’. The three tables consist of information from the following; Housing stock: by region and the type of dwelling during 2006 and 2007, ethnic group: by tenure in 2007 and also housebuilding completions: by number of have the high bedrooms [do you mean by number of bedrooms?]. They provide an overview of the UK society today, drawing together social and economic data from organisations, government departments across the four nations of the United Kingdom [the data are only about England, not the whole of the UK].

[this is a good introduction, but as I mentioned in my advice, a full introduction was not needed for this part of the TMA, as you only have 500 words and a proper introduction uses up a good chunk of it. Despite this, this first paragraph is good in its content and it would have been perfect for a full-length essay]

Table one provides statistics of housing stock details: by region and type of dwelling in 2006 to 2007. These dwellings consist of detached, semi-detached and terraced houses and also purpose-built, converted flats or maisonettes. Semi-detached houses and bungalows have the highest dwellings in the region [which region?], and flat/maisonette conversions in the North East, East Midlands and West Midlands have the lowest percentage. Subsequently, semi-detached properties are the highest [high?] in all regions except London [yes, and can you say a bit more about the anomalies in London?] where[as] terraced and purpose built properties are higher [than what?] in the South East and South West. Semi-detached properties are the highest [in which region?] and flat/maisonette properties in London have the lowest dwellings [not really. London has the highest percentage of purpose-built flats or maisonette...