Hox Genes

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Tense Shift Tense Shift:

Verb tenses should be consistent throughout your writing in order to make it clear when an action takes place. You will confuse your readers by switching from one tense to another within the same sentence or paragraph. When discussing literature or a published source document of some kind, readers expect you to use the present tense, even though the source you're writing about may have been written many years ago. When writing an essay about historical events, however, readers generally expect that you use the past tense.Tense Shift

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Vague

Unclear: When making a point in one of your body paragraphs, one of the most common mistakes is to not offer enough details. A paragraph without much detail will seem vague and sketchy. A paper is always strengthened when your claims are as specific as possible, The more detailed evidence you offer, the more reference points your reader will have. Remember that you are communicating your argument to a reader who has only your description to go by. Someone who reads your essay will not automatically know what you mean to express, so you have to supply details, to show the reader what you mean, not just tell him or her.

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S/V Agreement Subject-verb agreement:

Subjects and verbs should match in number and person. Singular subjects require singular verbs; plural subjects require plural verbs.

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Word choice error: Sometimes choosing the correct word to express exactly what you have to say is very difficult to do. Word choice errors can be the result of not paying attention to the word or trying too hard to come up with a fancier word when a simple one is appropriate. A thesaurus can be a handy...