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Hi everyone :),

Here is my motivation letter. I have never written any of this before so I hope you guys can help me to correct and perfect it as much as possible. Any comments are welcome :) Please take a look at this and give me some advices ^^ I appreciate any helps.Thank you very much

Dear Madam or Sir,

I wish to apply to the Bachelor in International Business at XXX conducted in January 2012.

*Introduce

"Knowledge is power" is my father's strong faith. Not surprisingly, he never told me any fairy-tale stories but the true ones from his own life about how an orphan could become a PhD. He made me believe in the power of knowledge that could change one's life forever. Hence, I never stop trying to improve my performance at school. This belief helps me to receive a certificate of merit for good performance in the 11th grade and to increase my score, especially in Math, English and Computer Science.

*Reasons to apply

The most important reason for my choice is I love business. My biggest dream is to become a successful CEO for a multinational corporation. Thus, International Business is exactly what I need to pursue to follow my dream.

Additionally, this program seriously aims at practical cases on providing precious experiences to students. For me, practical training in international environment is an integral part of the program's curriculum which will be a competitive advantage over other job candidates.

*Reasons to choose this university

The superior in facility and the fact students at XXX receive professional skills as well as enthusiastic helps from professors completely convince me to choose XXXX.

Not to mention, at XXX, I can build relationships and work with peers from all over the world, which to me definitely will be an amazing memory and also a good start for my business career. Last but not least, since XXX is one of the most beautiful cities in Europe with highest standard living, I expect a chance to live and study there....