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I am extremely excited about beginning my medical transcription career with you at Main Line Health Systems and look forward to making a positive impact in the lives of your patients. While your doctor is looking at your chart in the hospital, it isn’t often that a patient thinks about the work involved to make sure that their chart is accurate. I first realized this immense task when my mother recently battled and won her fight against cancer, which could not have been done without his amazing medical team. An important part of this team was the medical transcriptionists working behind the scenes making sure that her medical records were accurate, though, and prompt. Inspired by this fact, I looked further into the career of medical transcription and became enthused to join ranks in this vital profession. In this fast paced career I could make an important contribution that would affect peoples’ lives in a positive an d meaningful way. To do so I started my training at Penn Foster Career School in Pennsylvania. My training has involved taking courses in Office Procedures, Body Systems and Terminology, Basic Pharmacology, Confidentiality of Allied Health, and Medical Transcription. With the education I have gained and the enthusiasm for the profession I have chosen, I know that I can be a vital part of the Main Line Health Systems team serving your patients.

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Debbie,

I’m so happy that you moved to this area. I wanted to let you know of an opening at my employer; Women’s Health Center, I believe you have the personality and ability to successfully perform the duties of my employer. Dr. Kim, the doctor under whom I currently work for is looking for another assistant to specifically manage his schedule and handle his emails. He asked me if I knew anyone capable of handling his busy schedule, and you instantly popped in my head, because of your great communication skills. Since this position requires a person who is delightful and...