Leadership Final Paper

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Leadership Approach Paper [This title could be more inspiring. Labeling it a "paper" or an "essay" is redundant (what else could it be?), and only a few words as a title are not very explanatory (or intriguing to the reader). An ideal title has between six and a dozen words ]

LDR/531

08/20/12 [Do not abbreviate the date; write it out ]

Bridget Peaco

Leadership Approach Paper – Behavioral Approach

Management and leadership skills of employees inside any organization have a huge impact on the success of the firm. According to Yukl, G. (2010), most descriptions of leadership involve process of influencing people intentionally to lead, and build relationships in an organization.

Some leaders are born to become leaders and leadership is a natural skill that they own and do not have to build from scratch. However, most leaders are required [The passive voice is a form of "be" (are) and a participle (required)....