Naration Essay

During the hot summer of 2003 while driving on the freeway I met my husband for the first time. My roommate and I had a fight again and this time I was ready to move home. Since it was such a hot day I need to come up with a way to get my little brother David to come help me, since I wanted to be out that day. “David, can you please help me move out I asked”? He responds “What is in it for me”? By the sound of his voice I knew it was going to cost me something. “I will rent a video game for you”. I knew that would persuade him since he loves playing his Xbox. “Sure I will help you, but I want lunch too” He replies.

I merged onto the freeway, moving across into the fast lane and cut off this bright red new Mustang GT. “Watch out!” My brother yelled out. I didn’t care, I was driving my normal pace. As I look over at his face turning red in fear of crashing I said, “I am sorry I will try to drive a little slower”. I was still upset at this guy jumping in front of me and almost slamming on his breaks just to make a point. The next thing I know we are getting off the same exit. I turn and look at the driver; it was a cute young looking guy. As I roll down the window, my brother said to me, “what are you doing, you’re crazy don’t talk to that guy”. Lucky for me he already had his window down. “Hey, what’s up?” I yelled out the window. “You know you cut me off back there.” He looked at me and said “I am sorry but you cut me off first”. “Where are you headed”? He asked. “I am moving out of my apartment right now” “do you want to help”? I said sarcastically. “Sure I’ll help you”. He replies. “Okay follow me”. I was so excited; this cute guy was going to help me move out of my apartment.

We arrived at my old rundown apartment complex. “Hi, my name is Jenny and this is my little brother David”. “Hi, my name is Mark”. I was kind of nervous, I wasn’t sure if I should actually have him help me move my things or did he just want to talk...