Adhd

University of Phoenix Material

Completing the Essay Worksheet

Answer the following questions to help complete your final essay:

Introducation:

What does it mean to struggle? To struggle is to cope with the inability to perform well. Within a social setting, are you able to focus on a conversation, or to comment without being out of context? What about a academic setting, can you focus on the lecture, to at least be able to multitask through the class? For a person without ADHD this task is not easy. Children with ADHD struggle with compulsive behaviors, as a result it is very difficult to control.

Conclusion:

Children with ADHD struggle with everyday tasks. These tasks can make it very difficult to be socially and academically acceptable. Along with everyday tasks, these children struggle emotionally, making it difficult to become successful within our society. Gaining control over this disorder is key to overcoming these behavioral problems.

1. How will you use the feedback you received on your Week 5 body paragraph draft assignment to revise your paper as you get ready for your final submission in Week 7? If you did not submit your Week 5 assignment, summarize one goal you have for revising your paper in Week 7. Explain in 2 or 3 sentences.

My revision from week five gave me an overall idea of what to fix. I know for sure I need to work on my verb agreement as well as some basic grammar errors. Other than that I think I need to revise my sentences and reword some to make a crisper strong essay.