English

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Controlled Writing Activity # 1

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Sample Rough Draft and Self-Contained Paragraph

Method to be used: Time Order

Specifics: (1) one topic sentence

(5) five supporting sentences

(1) one concluding sentences

Rough draft:

1. Buying strawberries in the market

2. Haggling for signature bags in the Wagwagan

3. Boating at Burnham Park

4. Walking along the Session Road

5. Going to Mine’s View and the Bell Church

Our Summer Vacation in Baguio City

Topic Sentence

Rima, Jennica and I shared three wonderful days in Baguio. We stayed at the Pines Pension House near the Teacher’s Camp. During the first day, we went boating at Burnham Park. On the second day, we walked along the stretch of the Session Road going to Market where we bought fresh strawberries. Although we were already tired, we went to the Wagwagan in the evening to haggle for signature bags. And on the last day, we went to Mine’s View and Bell Church. It was such a memorable and exciting trip that we treasure as best friends

Concluding Sentence

Pick one topic:

Topic #1: My Daily Routine

Topic #2: My Last Vacation

Topic #3: How I Spend My Weekend

Method to be used: Time Order

Write a rough draft and as self-contained paragraph consisting of 7 sentences

1) One topic sentence

5) Five supporting sentences

1) One concluding sentences

As a pre- writing activity, list down five sentences under rough draft that will serve as your supporting details.

Rough draft:

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