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Feedback

The feedback I received from my instructor was about fine tuning, turning in assignments on time, and making them interesting. Fine tuning my essay I would adjust it precisely, to bring to the highest level of performance and effectiveness. Also to help me out in this field of fine tuning I would go back and read sample essays, to give me a good feel of what my paper should sound like. These things will help me in the future by keeping my audience’s attention and becoming a stronger writer.

The feedback I received from my peer review was very helpful for future essay. My peer had said that they can see that I put much work and effort into the research while preparing this assignment, but I had some grammar and spelling issues. In the future I will fix my spelling and grammar issues, by going over my essay more than once and always using the auto spell checker in word.

As far as the center for writing goes I did not submit my paper there, at the time I didn’t think it was very important, but now I know how important it would have been.

I didn’t personally submit my paper to the plagiarism checker, but my peer also mentioned that they had submitted it there and had said that 56% of my essay was plagiarized. To prevent this I will submit my essay days before its due and try my best to reference my work the correct way.

I actually included all information that I got from my peer review, and felt it will all be helpful for future reference.