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[Doctoral-level comment (but recommended for any collegiate writer)--Write out abbreviations in academic essays] Memo
To: Myra Reid Vice President Production
From: Latashia Miller Market Analyst
Date: 09/21/2011 [Do not abbreviate the date; write it out ]
Re: Sales Forecasting
I am calling on a meeting regarding the sales forecast for the year our [Use "we," "us," or "our" to mean yourself and coauthors, not general humanity (or yourself and the reader)] goal is to fix our production levels. I have [Avoid use of the first person (I, me, my) in academic writing unless writing about a personal experience. First person use may be allowed by the instructor. ] to come up with a plan for all [Writing suggestion: "All" or "all of" used as an intensifier can very...