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Introduction

AG: How many of you think cosmetic surgery is just for women?

LRL: Actually for all of you who raised your hand, you are wrong.

Thesis/Call to Action: I want to explain to you the reasons why most people get cosmetic surgery and why you should support the Donda West Plastic Surgery Law not in California but all across the U.S.

Preview: I will talk to you about:

1. I will tell you a story

2. I will give you some statistics

3. I will give you two expert testimonies

<Transition: Now that you know what I am going to be talking about, now let me tell you a story.>

Body

I. Lee Hayi explains the pressure she gets from her classmates and what she sees on TV. She explains that before she got plastic surgery her mother never once told her she was pretty, and after she got plastic surgery her mom tells her she’s pretty every day

A. A girl name Kelly did a documentary in what life is like in South Korea. She explains that many Korean students get plastic surgery after the Korean SAT’s.

B. Joan Rivers is one of those people is who is in love with plastic surgery as she has had 739 surgeries.

C. Lastly most of you should know how Kayne West’s mother died due to the fact that she decided to get liposuction and breast implant surgery even though she had these preexisting health issues like heart disease and clogged coronary arteries.

<Transition: Now let’s check on the statistics

II. Statistics compiled by the American Society of Plastic Surgeons reveal that 12.5 million cosmetic surgery procedures were performed in the United States in 2009

III. ASPS reports that some male surgical procedures increased significantly: Facelifts in men rose 14 percent in 2010, while male liposuction increased 7 percent. That society's 2010 statistics show that men underwent more than 1.1 million cosmetic procedures, both minimally invasive and surgical.

IV. According to Donna Henderson-King Materialism, Sociocultural Appearance...