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1.I do not believe it is the best way or only way to protect the environment.

2.What is meant by this is that each individual must be aware of the impact he or she has on the world and their unique part to play in this world.

3.What is needed,therefore,is education.

4.Many argue that the costs of globalizaiton are...许多人会说。。。

5.Only by further developing the way in which we manage our societies can we make sure that...

6....growing population and a changing economy 押韵式句法

7.we have seen and continue to see

8.We cannot afford to...议论文结尾重申观点后加一句对于反面观点的打击

9.As more and more subjects can be taught via the computer, there would seem to be less and less need for teachers to be present... more and more...less and less押韵结构

10.However,computers will never replace teachers because technology is only a tool and can never replace the spiritual element of the teacher.可以用在所有对立面事物的介绍上

Good teaching takes place when the learning is directly associated with our emotions.

Emotions 与spiritual element相呼应

11.The computer may communicate concrete knowledge,but only the teacher is able to communicate wisdom, to build self-confidence,and to make one think creatively...

12.What will happen is that technology will not replace teachers.The computer will take care of that.The teacher will have to stimulate the minds and bring out the creativity in his or her students.

结合上一句 creativity he creatively相互呼应的用法 此外这句话可用于避免与首段重复的结尾段重述

13.It will never replace the teacher,it will only make him or her more important.

14.I believe that if we were to rate prisons in the same way that we rate schools...

Another initiative would be to encourage those rehabilitated former offenders to become involved in teaching others 另一个积极的解决方案。。。前句rate为评价之意

15.Is not reducing criminal recidivism worth some innovation?反问句增加号召力

16.Television does not have to be violent or offensive to have a negative effect...不一定非要被冠以...的缺点

17.We refer to this as the 'couch potato' syndrome...refer...to 把什么当作

18.The...