Mis535

Week 1 Draft

by Daryl Ballard

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286 1452

TIME SUBMITTED PAPER ID

16-JUL-2012 10:07AM 258296042

Del. Commonly Confused

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Unnecessary ":"

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Missing ";"

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GRADEMARK REPORT FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

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Del. Delete Commonly Confused Commonly Confused Words:Words that have similar sounds but different meanings often cause trouble for student writers. Please watch for such confusions in your writing.Some of the more common of these common confusions include:Accept (to receive) and except (to leave out)Affect (toinfluence) and effect (result or to accomplish)Allusion (an indirect reference) and illusion (a false perception)Its (possessive form of "it") and it's (contraction of "it is")Their (possessive form of "they"), there (indication of location, and they're (contraction of "they are")Then (next or at that time) and than (used in comparisons)To (toward), too (also or excessively) , and two (number)Your (possessive form of "you") and you're (contraction of "you are") 1. The opening paragraph should state the purpose and let the reader know what will follow. This would be better in another paragraph. Unnecessary ":" Unnecessary colon Additional Comment: Consider writing this has a paragraph rather than using bullet points. 2. Keep in mind there two programs. One which is courses offered in-house and the other is the tuition reimbursement program. Be sure that both programs are explained. 3. Aren't bullet point #1 and #3 saying the same thing? 4. This requirement was changed. Take another look at the information provided. 5. pay is not capitalized. Could be better stated. End of a thought use a period. Missing ";" Missing semicolon:Semicolons are commonly used to join closely related, complete sentences that do not contain coordinating conjunctions or commas as connectors. Semicolons are also placed before words like "however" and "therefore" when such words are used to join...