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Date Submitted: 11/27/2012 01:55 AM
Electro
Narrator :( flashback) seventeen years ago a toddler by the name of max was struck by lightning while holding a fence in his home backward. He was then in a comma for thirteen years which he got out off when the doctors changed his mineral drip to salt water. One year later after he woke up , he discovered that he had special super natural powers.
Narrator: 3 years later after he woke up from comma.(max’s sixteenth birthday)
Ace :(max’s father) come on, get together for a picture.
Ace: say cheese.
Max & Veronica (max’s mother): cheeeeeeeeeese!!!!!!!
(suddenly the Window breaks violently and three armed gun man enter the house)
Gun man 1: get down.
Gun man 2: and you better stay there.
Ace: please don’t hurt us, take whatever you want and just don’t hurt us.
Gun man 1: shut up! (Kicking ace)
Gun man 3: we good to go!!!
Gun man 1: (shooting Ace dead in three shorts) thanks a lot
Gun man 2: David what are you doing?
Gun man 1: don’t say my name, you idiot. We can’t leave them alive, they have seen our faces and you just called my name (aiming at Veronica)
Max: (moving up in front of the gun) nooooooooo!!!!!!!
Gun man 1: how sweet. (Pulls the trigger and shoots Max in the chest)
Veronica: NOOOOOOOO!!!!
Narrator: David aims and shoots Veronica in the head, killing her instantly, and immediately after the three run off into the blue.
Narrator: max wakes up a few minutes after takes to his powers of quick recovery.
Max: mom! Dad! NOOOOOOO!!!
Narrator: 5 minutes’ later after calling the police, Max zaps off at lighting speeds in pursuit of th9e three gun man, where he catches up with them in an ally downtown.
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Max: YOU!
Gun man 1: NO way, didn’t I just kill you.
Max: you killed my parents
Gunman 2: whoo David this is messed up, shoot him again
(Max zaps quickly and pins gun man 2 & 3 on the ground hard, paralysing them completely)
Gun man 1: oh my g……….#(Max zaps and grabs him by...