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Associate Level Material

Appendix D

E-mail Etiquette

Read the following e-mails. For each e-mail:

• Describe any content and formatting errors found.

• Determine if the content is appropriate for a workplace setting. If it is, explain why. If not, identify the errors made and rewrite the e-mail, to be appropriate.

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|E-mail One |

|To: Tom |

|Subject line: Talent Reallocation |

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|Tom, |

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|This e-mail is in reference to the two employees who are going to be terminated Friday. We have determined that they are Nicole Stone|

|and Lorenzo Torres. As we discussed yesterday, their performances are not on par with those of other employees in the accounting |

|department; interventions with these employees have not been successful in helping them improve their performance. Let’s plan to meet|

|with them individually in the conference room between 3:00 and 4:00 p.m. |

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