Operational Gap

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The Results of my Career Building Plan Activities

Oluwatosin Okunola

MGT/521 - MANAGEMENT

01/15/2012 [Do not abbreviate the date; write it out ]

ROBERTO GUZMAN [Do not use all capitals in academic writing--unless in trade name, an acronym, or the running head ]

The Results of my Career Building Plan Activities

In discussing the results of my [Avoid use of the first person (I, me, my) in academic writing unless writing about a personal experience. First person use may be allowed by the instructor. ] career building plan activities, I will like to define who a communicator and [Grammar: A run-on sentence requires a comma before "and" (or other conjunction) linking main clauses] a manager are. Lovekar (2011), "A communicator transfers thought and ideas with an intention of delivering information.”  [Move the period to follow the citation] (Para. 1). “A manager is someone who coordinates and oversees the work of...