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Keen in all of my doings,

Enthusiasm is what I am showing,

Victory is what I am aiming,

Inspiring people is what I am choosing,

Negative thinking, we have to be avoiding,

Redeemed from the bondage of sin,

Abundantly living that’s where I am in,

Yielding all my problems, to Him I am sticking in,

Outpouring my soul, giving it all back to Him,

Salvation I am having, I’m never giving in,

Poetry

Unfamiliar words

Keen= very good; fineness.

Enthusiasm= felling of excitement; a lively interest.

Redeemed=restore the honor or worth of.

Outpouring = a large flow.

Attitude of Speaker

My attitude as a speaker portrays a description of what kind of person I am on the first paragraph, while on the second part, I am portraying my deep faith as a believer.

CONTENT

In the 1st paragraph, the poem reflects my attitude, what I am aiming to be, and what I wanted to be. I wanted to be an influencer, with this kind of world we are living, almost everything seems so corrupted. The 2nd paragraph reflects my spiritual relationship with my Savior, I wanted to describe how beautiful His love is. Though it is beyond description, His love is too marvelous for words, too wonderful for comprehension. His love? Unfathomable.

MOOD

I was on my room, contemplating how wonderful life is. The simple things are the most extraordinary things, and only wise can see them

PARAPHRASE

On the conceptual level, the emphasis of the stanza is really the meaning of life, what on earth were you here for?. It’s all about knowing your purpose. Know your Creator. Then start walking on the right track. Life is too short pleasing people. Let your self be the light to all the people who’s living in darkness. Spread His love for you only live once!

Figurative Language/ Symbol used

Outpouring soul= crying your heart out

Bondage of sin= the state of being under control of sin

Most Important Line

“Redeemed from the bondage of sin”

* Run from anything that gives...