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Date Submitted: 10/20/2013 10:15 PM

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Typically, a person who is considered [The passive voice is a form of "be" (is) and a participle (considered). Over-use of the passive voice can make paragraphs officious and tedious to read. Prefer the active voice. For example, passive voice = The paper was completed on time. Active voice = the student completed the paper on time. See Center for Writing Excellence > Tutorials & Guides > Grammar & Writing Guides > Active & passive voice] to be task oriented [If these two words function as an adjective, they should be spelled as a hyphenated word] is to be thought of as a great [Writing suggestion: "great" is an overworked word, too frequently seen, and too vague. It has too many meanings: huge, superior, numerous, etc. Use a more specific adjective] transactional leader! One of the most important items on their agendas is that they [If "they" refers to "one," it should be "one" also (and perhaps adjust the verb)] must complete tasks....