Apple Versus Oranges

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Apple versus Oranges

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09/28/2014

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Apples and Oranges [Eliminate unnecessary capitalization] are very healthy and delicious. Apples and Oranges [Eliminate unnecessary capitalization] [Last reminder—This is a repeated error. Please read the rest of the document carefully to locate other similar errors.] are fruits, which are both produced on trees commercially [Add a semicolon here, or divide the sentence into two sentences] they are used to make pies, sauces, [Insert a conjunction here] juices that we all can enjoy eating and drinking, and that's [Avoid the use of contractions in formal writing (e.g., Don't = do not)] just a few similarities. Start new paragraph here>Apples and Oranges have a few things in common as well as many things that differ. They both have the same exact size and weight. Both are common in the kitchen for sauces, juices [Add comma (Use commas between items in a series, and place a comma before the conjunction separating the final element)] and pies. They are both delicious fruits grown in orchards with being grown [Delete with being grown] in different climates, apples in cool climates, and oranges in warmer climates. The two fruits grow from trees in large orchards, and they are a type of food. They are very healthy for you to eat, and you can make all types of juices, pies, and sauces with them both and they are round. Start new paragraph here>Apples come in three different fun delicious [Add comma (Use commas between two or more adjectives that equally modify the same word)] colors red, yellow, and green. And they come in seven different varieties Galas, Fuji's [Check apostrophe use—eliminate apostrophes with plural and singular nouns that are not possessive.] , Granny Smiths, Red Delicious, Braeburn's [Check apostrophe use—eliminate apostrophes with plural and singular nouns that are not possessive.] , Pink Ladies, and Golden Delicious. Start new...