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Alice and the Rabbit

Alice and I were very tired of sitting next to her sister by the bank. All of a sudden a rabbit runs right in front of her and says, “Oh dear! Oh dear! I am late!” Then the rabbit took out a watch from his waistcoat pocket and looked at it! Alice got up on her feet. The rabbit surprised her when he took out a watch from his waistcoat-pocket. She burned with curiosity and followed the rabbit under the hedge through the field and popped into a hole. Then came Alice’s sister stumbling across the field searching for Alice while Alice was in the hole screaming. My attention was focus on the rabbit to see where it was heading. To my surprise, I loose sigh of the rabbit, and Alice was rescued. While Alice was still full with amazed, we headed down by the river bound for biking.

Sentence writing

1. To save ourselves from drowning, Adam and I had to

move away from their home.

1.To save ourselves from drowning, Adam, and I had to moved away from their home basement.

2. It’s no wonder everyone refers to Mary and Ashley as another Mother Teresa in the making; she loves to help and care after people everywhere- from the streets to her own friends.

2. It’s no wonder why, everyone refers to Mary, and Ashley as another Mother Teresa in the making; she loves to help, and care after people everywhere from the street to her own friends

3.He spoke of times past and future, and dreamt of things to be or talk of his future and some regrets in the past.

3.He spoke of times past, future dreamt of thing to be and or talk of his future , and some regrets in the past

4. In the popular book series, Harry Potter, the character of Hogwarts principal Albus Dumbledore, who portrays ‘good’, is constantly shown to believe in the power of true love and is portrayed as a strong, benevolent and positive character while the antagonist Lord Voldemort, who depicts the evil and...