Ielts Writting

0106班1-40号批改

Some people think the university education is to prepare students for employment, other think it has other functions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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A 注重学生的研究能力（research skills） B 深入了解一个领域（delve into a subject）C 不断拓展知识（advance knowledge）

e your own opinion.

Despite of preparation for work, university also provides students with opportunities to become professors.University lays emphasis on research skills and help them to delve to a subject. This is particular important for these students who want to go further on science or medical care. Higher education enables students to attain more advance knowledge and be more helpful for the development of society.

语法错误太多，逻辑性差，5.5分左右

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A大学教育为职业做准备 B 学会工作技能（job skills），方便找到工作（find employment）C 提高他们对学习的兴趣（fire enthusiasm for education）

University education plays a vital role in people’s job prospect. College education enable students to acquire job skills, like communication skills and analysis capabilities. So they can easy to find employment and improve their fire enthusiasm for education.

语法错误太多，拓展不够，5.5分左右

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A 注重学生的社会责任感（social responsibility） B 考虑对社会的贡献（make a contribution to）C 更有成就感（have a sense of fulfillment）

Students should pay more attention to their social responsibility .The university education enables students to make a contribution to the society. For example, they can help elderly woman who lived alone or to be a volunteer teacher in the summer vacation. So, they will have a sense of fulfillment after that.

拓展不够，解释不够，6分左右

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A大学教育为职业做准备 B 学会工作技能（job skills），方便找到工作（find employment）C 提高他们对学习的兴趣（fire enthusiasm for education）

Some people think that university education should pay closer attention to students’ employment issue and it can make students easy to find employment if students acquire job skills. For example, accountants learnt how to analyze financial statement and some...