Peer Review Appendex G

Appendix G

Peer Review Checklist*

What is the main point of this paper?

The main point of this paper is talking about eating healthy and the different ways that people deal with obesity, such as having different surgeries like gastric bypass surgery and the lap band surgery.

What is the greatest strength of this paper? The greatest strength of this paper is when the writer discusses the different ways of losing and explaining the procedure, the advantage and the disadvantage of it.

What material does not seem to fit the main point of the paper or does not seem to be appropriate for the audience?

The end part about the disadvantage to not eating healthy this part kind of threw me off a little. I don’t think that part should be in the paper.

Has the author sufficiently addressed counterarguments? Explain your answer.

I really didn’t find any counterarguments in the paper, other than If people would eat healthy foods and exercise than the lap band and the gastric bypass surgery wouldn’t be an option.

Where should the author add more details or examples? Explain your answer.

The food pyramids great picture, but could you get a bigger one? Everything is smashed together could you find a picture that shows it separated a little; It’s still a great paper though.

Where is the writing unclear or vague?

Everything in this paper was clear and the writer explains the views very well. Everything flow right together.

What is your favorite part of this piece of writing?

I enjoyed the paper as a whole. It educated me, giving meaning and clarity!

What other comments can you provide for the author?

I enjoyed your paper great work!!!! You educated me a lot…. GOOD LUCK ON YOUR PAPER!!!