Geneticaly Modified Organisms 40 Pages

Genetically Modified Organisms - Rough Draft - Team E

by Timothy Welling

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GRADEMARK REPORT FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

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1. This percentage is a bit high...please review.

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2. Tim, You wrote quite a bit of this paper and your writing is very strong! Weak Transition Weak paragraph transition:Although paragraphs are separate, individual steps of your paper, it is important to clearly demonstrate a logical connection between them. Generally speaking, the way your paragraphs relate to one another displays how sound your argument really is. A paragraph that begins with "also" or "in addition" offers a weak transition from the previous point, even though it may develop a highly interesting and related point.

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3. Paragraph indent. [Untitled] Good section! 4. Is this an in text cite?

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5. All taken from source?

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6. delete 'the'

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Weak Transition Weak paragraph transition:Although paragraphs are separate, individual steps of your paper, it is important to clearly demonstrate a logical connection between them. Generally speaking, the way your paragraphs relate to one another displays how sound your argument really is. A paragraph that begins with "also" or "in addition" offers a weak transition from the previous point, even though it may develop a highly interesting and related point.

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